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Maximum Ride - the new kid chapter 1

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Max's pov

Today at school, i walked into my 1st period class, the teacher said that we had a new student. All of us stared at our teacher wide-eyed. Just then a boy step into the classroom. He was dressed in all black, his hair was black, and his eyes were black. All the girls (including me) mouths dropped when we saw him. The teacher said that his name was Fang and that he transfered here from Virginia. Fang looked at his then his eyes locked on me. I blushed. He took the seat next to me. He looked at me then almost immediately turned his head to face the teacher. He blushed.

Fang's pov

I looked at the girl that sat next to me. I quickly turned away.

I then blushed.

Once I saw her, I started falling in love with her. Who knew love was so hard.

Max's pov

I started falling in love with Fang. He was so cute!

The final bell rang and I rushed out only to bump into Fang.

Fang's pov

I looked at the girl that bumped into me. It was her!

She said that her name was Maximum Ride, Max for short.

I said hi. She asked what classes i was in. I showed her my schedule and she said that we were in every class together. I blushed.

Then she blushed. She said that she would see me tomorrow.

I sighed when she left. There were no words to describe her.

She was the first person that was nice to me.

Should i do more or what?

Hi! I'm new here.